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Sunday 17 May 2020

Writing

Hi,
This is the writing that I have made for the activity called ( Can You Write The Next Hollywood Blockbuster Movie Script ) So I made a story and it is an action one so here it is.

Tech
A Rocket has been launched to space with an advanced technology inside it. Afew years later the rocket had fallen back to earth so a group of people were trying to find it. Cov's group was trying to find it. Cov is a person that locates things using technology and makes things out of technology he is 19 years old. But a few months later a guy named Live found the rocket with the tech inside it so he took all of the good looking tech and brought it home with him using his 4x4 car.

Live - These are good technologies. I wonder how I am going to use it. Live still driving on the road.
Cov - Everybody we need to find the rocket we need to locate it before anyone finds it.
Cov - Go!!! He shouted.
A few weeks trying to locate where the rocket is they finally found it so Cov was the one who found it.
One of the members - Shouted how did you find it.
Cov - Shouted move we need to get there now.
Members - GO!!! They shouted.
They used vans and cars to get there really fast; they were going 100 miles per hour.
Then at 1PM they got to the location Cov’s members with guns went out first so if there was any person there hiding they could shoot that person.
One of the members said. All Clear
Cov - Went closer and closer walking towards the rocket and when Cov looked inside the rocket the tech was not there anymore on the place where they were put. 

Cov’s members started to track the tech that has been stolen a few minutes later Cov’s group has tracked the parts of the rocket that have been stolen and they were able to locate where it is. So they went there with their guards down and also without backups in case of an emergency. They KNOCK!!! at the front door of the place where the parts have been tracked after they knock 

Live’s - Comes towards the door and opens it.
 Cov -  Show a photo to Live and ask do you know these. 
Live - Shoots with a gun that he had made. Cov’s group was able to get away quickly.

After a few weeks Cov made a machine that is made from advanced tech that he has made. It is like a person but it's metal and also four times heavier on an average human weight. It was really heavy.

Cov - Lets  try it out
Then Cov uses the control to control it and follow them so Cov has put the robot inside a big room and trained it to fight. First they made a strong wind to try and blow pan the robot but it didn’t get blown then Cov shot a big bullet to the robot and the robot slash it into half.
Cov - I am going to name him Pan like my grand grand grand mother.
The robot was ready to use and after a few weeks practicing the robot to fight it was ready to use the went back to Live’s house and also brought a backup and they now brought guns with them and also snipers from a very far distance so no one could see them. Then they knock again at the front door and Live opened the door and said you again
 Cov - made a hand signal so the sniper can shoot Live.
Live - pushes the button to activate the tiny spiders that he has made and carry him at the same time other spiders are distracting and fighting Cov’s group  but at the same time Live pushes a button to activate the tiny spiders that he has made and carry him at the same time that other spiders distract the army and Cov’s group so Live could get away. 

Then they keep on upgrading the robot named pan so it gets stronger than before so they could use it against Live’s evil technology.Then they went again to Live’s house but this time they kick the front door open but Live wasn’t there anymore so they had search everywhere inside the house but there was not a single tech inside the house also Live was not in the house. They tried to track down Live but he was not anywhere to be tracked down.Cov’s group was all looking down they were so down they are like so lazy but they heard a sound BEEP that is so loud and Cov said that is the tracker and they look at it and they found Live in the middle of the desert travelling fast with the tech so Cov and his group started to follow Live and a few hours the caught up with live because they were using a sports car. Live got surrounded and he has nowhere to go. Cov also brought Pan the robot that he has made so they can be a backup because they don’t know if Live has a robot tech travelling with him. The two robots detected each other and they started to fight BOOM!!! They started fighting each other at the same time Cov’s group was fighting Live because he was so dangerous Live was using a tech shield so he does not get shot easily. Live was trying to get away slowly from Cov’s group.
Live was able to get away using his car.
Cov’s group was having difficulty shooting at his car because there was an invisible shield that protected his car. 
Cov was trying to chase Live but it was no use because he used smoke to block the road so they wouldn’t know where he would go. 
Cov and his group went back to the place where they were before to the technology place. 
But before they even went to chase Live Cov has already made a robot named Dem he is also made out of metal but he is not as hard as Pan so Cov has made an armour for Dem to use. Cov made this secretly only by himself at a place where there are no people. Cov uses Dem to slow down Live so they would be able to chase him down.  So the other robots that Live made the tiny spider robot or the spinbot that he has made fighted with Dem so Live doesn’t need to worry about fighting the robot himself with a gun. So Live left the spider robots and Dem fighting Dem was going fighting really hard because there were so many Spiders around. Dem Jump to the air and spiders attacked him while in the air Dem was falling down straight to the tree but he has used it to bounce then he SLASH!!! The spiders head all at one hit. Live was able to get away but luckily Cov set it up in case Live escapes to the place where they were fighting so Cov already has put  a group of members blocking the road then that is when they were able to capture Live. Then Live was sent to prison and Cov and Cov’s group were able to get the tech back to the technology place. 

They were able to get the tech back where it belongs so they were so happy and celebrated.

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