Hi,
In writing we have to pick what kind of story we are going to write so I choose to do action and there's other choices like Horror, Fantasy, Adventure. We have to make our own writing but it needs to be about what we have chosen so I wrote about action. We had some instruction to follow so we can make a good story. After a few days we had to share what we had done so far so here is what I have done.
Monday 4 May 2020
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Kamusta Joshua!
ReplyDeleteI've missed reading your awesome blogs this year now that you are with another class. This looks like a very detailed writing plan for your adventure story! You have decided to include a lot of characters, I wonder how you will introduce them to us through your story.
I will check back to see your finished project! I hope you and your family are staying safe and busy in isolation!
- Miss Birtch
Hi Joshua
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your writing planning with us. You have put a lot of work into your writing planning and there is a lot of detail in the sequence of events. I agree with Miss Birtch - you do have a lot of characters, but I like the way you have given us a summary description of each of them. I think you may have forgotten to add your word bank (slide 11), so it would be good to revisit that at some stage. I look forward to reading your finished work.
- Mr Mitchell