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Thursday 21 September 2017

Partly cloudly

For this week we have been writing about the partly cloudy it was a very good video because the cloud was have face. The clouds was look like fluffy and like marshmallows.



The city was getting dark and the sun was shining it was orange. The birds were going down to the city and they were going to the colorful tall houses. The birds was carrying some blankets and there were delivering them to the other peoples on the whole city. The birds were flying now and they was so fast they were like Airplanes or faster than Airplanes.
The birds went up to the clouds and the clouds were shining orange. They were like humans because they were have  face.They look like so fluffy and like marshmallows, Cotton Candy and Cotton Balls.

The cloud looked like kind but they are really kind they are the one who is making the presents to the people. They make it because they want the people to be happy. But this storm lonely cloud he is making a dangerous presents and scary he make crocodile’s and some sharks.


All of the birds was happy but this bird is little bit happy because he is doing some hard working. This bird was giving endangered presents to the people or to other animals on the city. That bird was truthful and kind but he was working with the stormy cloud. Then that bird can do it anymore.

That bird went to the good and shiny clouds because he so the puppies and it was socute. Then the stormy cloud look at the shiny cloud and kind he look at it because he’s bird went there. But the truth is his bird go there because he went to get the rugby gear and the bird wear it.

The stormy cloud was get angry and that stormy cloud was getting bigger and bigger but he stop and get back to normal then he started crying and it start raining down the city, it was thundering to because it was raining and the stormy cloud stopped caring.

The stormy cloud bird was carrying something and it a rugby gear. The bird put the suit on write at the front on the stormy cloud. The bird wants to give more dangerous animals to the other people.

The bird was really like now helping the stormy cloud and giving some dangerous animals. The bird was really like wearing now the rugby gear on suit.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Joshua the introduction were you said.It was a very good video because the cloud was have face the was have face don't make sense other then that its awesome.

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  2. Hi Joshua, This story was one of the best that I have read so far. I like how you showed not talked that what made it cool. But at the start you did not make seance because you said the cloud was have face but it was all good. Tom Out

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