Writing a Pharagraph

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This week we have started writing about the starting of the sentence and we have to do one of them and make it in a sentence. I picked the sentence that start of who like the A very unusual face suddenly appeared in the window and we have to make that in a sentence. If you put a writing that looks like a reality it makes your writing more stronger because it more looks like happen in real life. We can also put a explanation mark on our writing like something crack like a window you can use that on your writing. Here is the work that I have made.

A very unusual face suddenly appeared in the window. I hid under my blanket and I was being quiet. It was a “Thief” he was trying to open the window and he couldn’t open it. I heard the thief takes a few steps and sprint and hit the window and I heard the window !crack” like he throw a stone on the window. But it wasn't a thief it was just a cat shadow.

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Fantasy World

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To day I gonna show you what we have been doing. Last term and this term we have been doing our fantasy worlds. We also have a group that will help to make the worlds and to also build eat faster. Our group also made a script to make a video about our world so it is like each person will have to read something like one person will do about the volcano. The other will do something else like the villages or something on our world. Here are some pictures and video.

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Venn Diagram

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This week we have been doing a Venn Diagram. We also have been reading a fairy tales story like the three little pig,Jack and the Beanstalk and the Goldilocks and the Three bears we have been reading those three story.We also have to write something like the three little pig and the Jack and the beanstalk got the same thing like there was a Antagonist and Protagonist like that. But if you don't know Protagonist is like the main character or the good guy and the Antagonist is the bad guy or the villain so that is what we have been doing on our Venn Diagram.

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Maths DLO

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Today I'm going to show you my DLO that me and my buddy made because this week we have a buddy that as two will help each other to answer some questions on the piece of paper. So we have to show our working out so we work it out and explain how we got the answer and not just writing the answer for each question. They will not understand what you mean if you just write the answer that's why we have to write how we solve. So here are some photos of the questions that we had to answer.

Jack and the Beanstalk MindMup

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This week we have been creating a MindMup about the Jack and the beanstalk. So we have read the story of it in the piece of paper and we watch the other story of the Jack and the beanstalk and Jack was the Antagonist because he was the villain. The other story that we have read on the piece of paper Jack was the protagonist because he was just wanting a food because he haven't eaten yet. That's why we have made a MindMup and we have to describe Jack and we have to write it on the MindMup. Here it is.

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My Character

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This week we have been doing a writing about our My Character. So her is the started of the things we done is the Introduction so in the Introduction we we have to put like the where,when ,who that's why we can know when did it happen or we can not like who is it. So we have to write the where,when ,who so we can make a one sentence at the Introduction so that is what we have been doing so here some of the things we done. So here it is the simple Introduction that we have made.

The character I have made is color full and live in the snowy tree mountains.

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The three little pigs

Hi. To day I gonna show you the things we have been doing on this week and last week we have to write the things that we thought after reading the story. It is also like you make it on your own words.

The wolf was going on the all of the houses of the three little pig. So he said to the first little that's inside the house made out of straw pig let me in so he puffed and half and plow the house down and eat the first little pig. The wolf was also coming on the second little pig house that is made out of straw. When the wolf got on the house he knocked and the little pig said no so the wolf puffed and half and blow the house down so he so the pig eat him. When the wolf was already eat the two little pig and he was full but not really full so he said I gonna go on the third little pig also got a problem with the wolf because the wolf keep tricking him. But the wolf puffed and half and the house did not get blow down because he build it made out bricks so the wolf can't blow it down and he could not eat the third little pig. So he fallow the little pig and when the little pig when't inside the wolf climb on the roof to go on the chimney and climbed down and down but the little pig made a fire and the wolf fall from it. Then the third little pig did not live happy forever because there still some wolf coming at his house.

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Two stories of the little pigs

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 To day I gonna show the three little pig story. So we have been doing this three little pig story and we have to answer the questions and we have to read the two stories of the tree little pig. Because the first story we read was the three little pig story and the other one was the true little three pig story. So we have a questions and we have to write who was the Protagonist the Protagonist means is like the good guy and the Antagonist means is the villain or the bad guy. But the three little pig story was different and the other story the true little three pig was also different.