Things you have to remember when you use the device

The things you have to remember when you are using your chrome books. So last week we have been doing some DLO about Chromebooks and this is also for respecting your Chromebooks like you are not holding it on the screen that's why it doesn't brake the screen so that is the things that we have been learning about on Cybersmart. You can also read the image on or the video at the bottom of this image.

I hope you comment with helpful,thoughtful and positive

The Ball Pit

For this week we have been writing about The Ball Pit and we write about the boy because he was afraid of heights. If you want to watch the video I put up a link at the top of my Writing. You can just press the blue link at the top.

The Ball Pit

It was a sunny day outside, it was really hot. It was hotter than the boiling water. That’s why, I was inside the playground at McDonalds. I was at the top of the slide. I was afraid of heights but I still tried to go down and I was nervous. My bones were chilling. I was so scared because it was my first time to try the slide. That’s why I was afraid. I tried the slide because my favourite colour is orange and the color of the slide was orange. The slide was really long the shape was like a big snake.

I went down the slide and I took a deep breath. Then I screamed AAAAAAAAA!  When I'm going down the slide it take’s a little bit longer to go down to the ball pit. The ball pit was deep as the ocean. I screamed again AAAAAAAAAAAA! Then I fell down to the almost end of the ball pit. I was scared because it was dark down in the ball pit. There was only one light at the top then I tried to get up but it was slippery and I tried it again to go up. I almost fell down but I did not know that I already held the lollipop stick.

I picked up the lollipop and used it to get up to the ball pit. I used the half lollipop like a hammer because it stuck to the balls and I got up to the ball pit it was little bit longer to go up. I got tired because it was hard to get up here and I wished I don’t fall again to that deep ball pit because it was deeper than the ocean. When I got up to the top of the ball pit I ate the half lollipop and if it’s a dirty lollipop I’m still gonna eat it.

The Present

W.A.L.T:  Write a narrative

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when….

• The title is suitable for the text.

• The orientation tells who the story is about, and when and where the story happened.
• The complication describes a problem and explains what happened next.
• The resolution explains how the problem was solved.
• Seeks feedback and makes changes to texts to improve clarity and meaning.

In Ako Ngatahi we had to write a narrative about a video. It was about a boy opening a present that was a dog with three legs. Here is the video of the present. I hope you enjoy my story.

The Present

The Present

On one fine day I am playing my ps4 counter strike game. At the brightly sun at the afternoon . My mum was get home She have a box and I don’t no what is inside the box. My mum put the box to the table and my mum distracted me and stop playing. I almost get lost on my game. My mum said that is a present for you I said to my mum for me the present I open the box and I so a puppy It was cool. But I look at the dog legs and I so broken leg. I said “Yuck.” I throw the puppy  and the puppy start being silly. puppy came back. I kick the puppy the puppy found a ball and the dog has get the ball and the dog get little hurt  when the puppy go under the cabinet when the puppy getting the ball and the puppy ran and fell and lose the ball `and he wants to play with me and I kick the ball and the dog has get the ball.The dog was jumped in the box and the dog was get inside the box.the dog ran and get the hurt in the cabinet and bang and me I see the ball and the dog jumped.Get the ball and came back to me and the dog fell three times when and the dog give the ball to me again and I get the ball and I stand up and I have a broken leg to and the dog was get sad when I stand and I said to my mum where going outside and I throw the ball little far and the dog get It.