W.A.L.T. write a descriptive piece of writing through the eyes of Danny.
Hi guys. For the last 1 week we have been writing about The Ridge. This is the story is about it its not quit long but this is good story. Bye.
Have a look at the video first. Click Here.
Have a look at the video first. Click Here.
Title: The Ridge
I was in a river and I am paddling my boat to move the boat. I so a seal at the grass walking back to water. There so many hills mountains around me. I bring my bike because I can ride it if I am at the grass.
I was getting out of my bout and get my bike to ride it. I ride my bike all the way at the top of the hill but when it's high carried my bike all the way up to the end of the hill.
I ride my bike all the way down the hill I did some tricks like balancing in my bike then jumped to get to the other side of the hill then I ride it then I was really tired and I am at the top the hill then I carried my bike all the way up.
It was so scary because if I did the wrong way I can fall down the hill. Then I started riding my bike all the way down the hill it was a long time to go down the hill. I was so fast when I am almost down the hill.
When I am down the hill I paddled my bike so fast. The grass was brown and high there was a fence write at front of me then I do know what I am gonna do. I decided to bounce at the fence and do a back lift.
I was at the at the beach seating.At the sand watching the water moving forward backwards. Then I put my bike beside me that's why after I rest a little bit I can go back to my boat.
The End
Hey Joshua,
ReplyDeleteWhat a great story, you took me on a journey and explained what was around you well! I can imagine the green and round grass around you at the top of the ridge. For an awesome story an awesome title would be great - what would be something that would make other people want to read this?