For this week we have been writing about The Ball Pit and we write about the boy because he was afraid of heights. If you want to watch the video I put up a link at the top of my Writing. You can just press the blue link at the top.
The Ball Pit
It was a sunny day outside, it was really hot. It was hotter than the boiling water. That’s why, I was inside the playground at McDonalds. I was at the top of the slide. I was afraid of heights but I still tried to go down and I was nervous. My bones were chilling. I was so scared because it was my first time to try the slide. That’s why I was afraid. I tried the slide because my favourite colour is orange and the color of the slide was orange. The slide was really long the shape was like a big snake.
I went down the slide and I took a deep breath. Then I screamed AAAAAAAAA! When I'm going down the slide it take’s a little bit longer to go down to the ball pit. The ball pit was deep as the ocean. I screamed again AAAAAAAAAAAA! Then I fell down to the almost end of the ball pit. I was scared because it was dark down in the ball pit. There was only one light at the top then I tried to get up but it was slippery and I tried it again to go up. I almost fell down but I did not know that I already held the lollipop stick.
I picked up the lollipop and used it to get up to the ball pit. I used the half lollipop like a hammer because it stuck to the balls and I got up to the ball pit it was little bit longer to go up. I got tired because it was hard to get up here and I wished I don’t fall again to that deep ball pit because it was deeper than the ocean. When I got up to the top of the ball pit I ate the half lollipop and if it’s a dirty lollipop I’m still gonna eat it.
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