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Thursday, 14 September 2017

The Ball Pit

For this week we have been writing about The Ball Pit and we write about the boy because he was afraid of heights. If you want to watch the video I put up a link at the top of my Writing. You can just press the blue link at the top.

The Ball Pit



It was a sunny day outside, it was really hot. It was hotter than the boiling water. That’s why, I was inside the playground at McDonalds. I was at the top of the slide. I was afraid of heights but I still tried to go down and I was nervous. My bones were chilling. I was so scared because it was my first time to try the slide. That’s why I was afraid. I tried the slide because my favourite colour is orange and the color of the slide was orange. The slide was really long the shape was like a big snake.

I went down the slide and I took a deep breath. Then I screamed AAAAAAAAA!  When I'm going down the slide it take’s a little bit longer to go down to the ball pit. The ball pit was deep as the ocean. I screamed again AAAAAAAAAAAA! Then I fell down to the almost end of the ball pit. I was scared because it was dark down in the ball pit. There was only one light at the top then I tried to get up but it was slippery and I tried it again to go up. I almost fell down but I did not know that I already held the lollipop stick.

I picked up the lollipop and used it to get up to the ball pit. I used the half lollipop like a hammer because it stuck to the balls and I got up to the ball pit it was little bit longer to go up. I got tired because it was hard to get up here and I wished I don’t fall again to that deep ball pit because it was deeper than the ocean. When I got up to the top of the ball pit I ate the half lollipop and if it’s a dirty lollipop I’m still gonna eat it.

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