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Hi my name is Joshua and today I will tell you the first computer made. Computers are helping us to learn not to cheat for Example search it on the google like 1+1 = you don’t know and you search it on the google and it say it’s 2. So here some idea to use the computer’s properly use computers to do researching or research for some facts like polar bears not to copy their writing that you so on the screen because you don’t have any permissions. Computers are also amazing because when you press the keys on the keyboard it’s going to be in the same time on your screen.
And the first computer made is a metal it doesn’t have any screen because it’s only a meta. This computer is very awesome because you can’t sea any keyboards but you can type on it because at the side that is where the letters are. But first you have to put some papers in the middle of it and you also have to put some inks because you have to put it like on the bottle that is where you put the inks. You can also get tired because if you get out of papers you have to get another one and if you get out of inks you have to get another one.
But the builder who is the first one to make the computer he is awesome because no one know’s who can build the computers on that year. Because they doesn’t have any internet connection and that computer you don’t need to worry to charge it because it’s a metal and it’s a manual because you only have to put some inks and you can write any what you want. But that year the first computer made you can’t draw on it because you can only type a letter because they haven't know how to made that yet like our computer now.
But today the computer is now not like that because today the computers is so cool because now you can sea picture from it and you can watch videos and play some games. You can also now use the computers for learning to the school it helps you to learn not to cheat that you're searching it up on the google if you don’t know the answer and to day you can use the computers because you can take it off from the plog it out from the charge and you can take it where you ever want it to go. You can also use it as a charger because at the side you can charge your phone on it.
Do you know how the computer made they try to find some Engines. They also made the computer not so easy because they don’t know how to made it yet. So this is only a trial for them if the computer is gonna work they will build thousands of them that’s why they can sell it. So that the computers will get famous and famous on that year that’s why they will build thousands of computers.
After they build the computers the first one who build the computers that person is really famous on that year. Because no one knows how to build a computer they said some of the scientists help the person who is the first one who build the computer. That’s why when the computer is finished is really awesome but is only made out by one person and I did a lot of research here to find out who made the first computer and here it is Charless Babbage.
This sentence can help you or not because I gonna tell you where is the first computer made? So a lot of researching I found what country they made the first computer and I read the sentences. Then they said on the writing that the first computer was in the England.
They also said that the first computer made it doesn’t use any electricity that’s why you don’t need to worry about the electricity at your house. They said that the computer is a manual that’s why they build that don’t have any electricity computer and that is really cool made.
I also gonna tell you that this first computer made is very hard to make because they haven’t know how to make prototypes that’s why it takes many years. It was like that what I was researching on this computer that they made it a thousands of years to make it and after they made it they are very lucky to have the computers.
For this researching I found what day and year the first computer made so they said that the first computer made was on February 15, 1946. That is the day that they finish making the computer and it looks awesome when they show it on the TV.
And some of the computers are big that they build the first one and some of them are small. The first computer made also is like that you can see that computers wire at the back of it and the back of the computer are really long because they have to put long wires on it. That’s why the computer will work and if the computer doesn't have any wire maybe it’s not gonna work that’s why they put a wire on it.
They said that the machine that they use on the first computer made is and Engine and it’s could the Analytical Engine that this Engine can do conceived. That thing is helping that computer to work that’s why the computer are really big and at the back of it there is the Engines.
This first computer Invented also can’t do and answering questions like maths. Because they haven’t know how to make a computer like our one because that is a long time ago because they don’t have any Internet. That’s why they made an a manual computer that don’t use electricity.
This video can show how charles Babbage computer works that’s why I been researching some video that it is real that charles Babbage made this computer. But they say that he did not finish it because he died and some scientist tried to finish the computer and could for some help from other scientist that’s why they can finish it. But the computer they made is just like you have to roll it then it will write some letters maybe you can get this video but me I don’t get this video because it’s look like not even real.
If you watch the link you can sea that the computer have number at the side of it. But the truth is that s the letters at the inside of it that’s why they have to keep rolling the computer that’s why can write at the piece of a paper. It was also easy to use because all you have to do is scroll the lever side and then to the other side. It was also fun because the people try the computer they were really like to buy it.
The inside of the computer is like this this is the parts of it and you can sea there that is have letters on it. Charles Babbage is also smart because we did not know that the computer that he made is only that you have to pull the lever and then you can write on it.
Charless Babbage is look like this and when he build the computer on that year he is very old like this on the picture. That’s why he did not finish the computer and some scientist helped Charless Babbage and then he just died on that year but don’t worry about that it was a long time ago.
This last year long time ago they tried to build the computer like charles Babbage made but they don’t know. It was small but when they finish building it it was bigger than a person it wasn't like Charles Babbage made and there lever is big to because if the lever is small the will laugh at it because computers big and lever is small.
Every time they move the lever is the same time that at the piece of paper the letter that you write on it. They were very lucky that someone invented a computer and I just don’t know where they get the word computer or maybe I just need to do more researching for this and where did they get the word computer.
They could it the computer because it compute some questions that’s why the could it the computer they also say could it compute. But on that year the computer that they made can’t computer any questions but our computer is can computer questions know because now scientist they are the ones who is inventing machines.
Charless Babbage is an Engineer that’s why he Invented the computer first computer because no one else know how to make computer. He made the computer because he wants to help people he doesn’t want them to write at the piece of paper that’s why he Invented the computer that’s why we have now a computer.
He’s computer that he made is also can solve maths questions he made it that’s why the teacher don’t get confused how much are they. He made it for there country he made it because he likes to be the first one who made the awesome computer that they never ever made a computer.
Charles Babbage is also live in London he was travelling around the world but he born on United Kingdom. He also went to england he grew up there and he just get older and older on London Charles Babbage also made the first computer on London that’s why the London is the first country that have a computer that is because Charles Babbage Invented computer. When he finish it people tried to make computers as many as they want like Charles Babbage made.
After they made the computer they went to sell the computer and then they sell it like a thousands of dollars or its more than that. He sell it like 200 thousand dollars that’s why the computer is not easy to sell that year because it's so expensive. This is the end of the computer and this is also the end of my writing.
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Hi Joshua, I really liked your information report about the first computer. Also this is a really good topic to write about. I have learnt something new about the first computer made. I though that the first computer made was quite smaller than the picture that I saw. But when I read your post I could find some mistakes that you needed to fix. I hope you like your post about your information report about the first computer invented. Have a cool 😎 day! Bye!!
ReplyDeleteHello Joshua,
ReplyDeleteI really liked you post I didn't know that Charles Babbage made the computer until know; not only that but you also had a lot of amazing facts about your topic, the computer. But there were parts where I didn't understand your sentences, your first paragraph didn't really hook me in plus you didn't put the right punctuation. Anyway except those little mistakes it was really good!