School Holidays
Kumusta. well come back on my blog. This blog post is about our writing and this thing that I wrote is the first paragraph that I have made. This writing is about the school Holidays and our focus was on creating a sense of place.
On Saturday two days before school we went swimming on the Pioneer. It was really fun swimming and also the water was warm it got more fun for swimming and we also go on the deep side of the pool and we use the things the will float you and you will not drown and we use that to go on the deep side of the pool. We went there because the is a waves and it is really big and we had fun of it but if you stay there like long you can see the waves starting to slow down and when it is big and hit the wall it splash into your face and that’s why I also bring goggles.
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