Happier writing

Hi,
So we are writing about the happier short film so there are two main character in the film so it is the girl and the dog. So we have to choose one of the main character so I choose the girl.

It was my birthday and I was sitting on a chair at the dining table and there was tears coming out of my eyes. There was kids running around the dining room with a ballon and blowing the ballon also shouting screaming. Then finally my mom put down the cake in front of me at the table and I was ready to make my wish for my birthday but suddenly a girl was running to me and I was ready to blow the candle on my cake and the girl has blown it before me. Then I look at her in a seconds then suddenly tears were coming out from my eyes and wiping it with my hand. But then I so my dad giving me a present in front of me and also stop crying then I opened the present and I so a yellow ribbon inside the box.

Suddenly my dad was carrying a dog and I was so shocked and got excited to touch it it was so fluffy when I look at it and also colour white it was like a teddy bear.  Then I have at the dog then my dad was coming to me then he gave the dog to me and it was so so fluffy then it started leaking me in my face several times. Then I put the yellow ribbon around its neck and my dad was trying to get as a photo then my dad puts the picture of me and my dog on the top of the shelf. My dad also measures out height both of us me and my dog as we grow up together and get older and then when I was in high school and we were picking teams for soccer and no one had pick me in a team. After that we were playing soccer then after playing soccer they took a photo of us a team and I was in the middle but some body push me out and I was in the side. Then the camera man said smile then when we all smiled they all look at me and they so my brace and then the laugh at me and I ran into the house with tears.

When I got home I lay down on the coach and crying so loud then my dog came then I went to play with it and it just lay down on the ground. Then I kept trying to play with him but my dog did not want to play. Then after a day my do was just laying down on the ground and not standing up it was unhappy and so weak then I just cried then I shout dad help because my dog was very sick then my dad carried my dog then we take him down into the hospital. Then we put him on the bed then I sat down with my dog then I path him on the head to keep him calm. Then my dad came into the door and said there is no way we could save your dog and I was crying and my face was full of tears of sadness. Then I took the yellow ribbon out of his neck.

20 years later when I was old I had a daughter and it was her birthday and the same thing happen to her like mine when I was a little kid. Then her dad give her a red ribbon and I was shook then I saw that my daughters dad got a puppy like mine when I was a little kid to. Then I smiled then my daughter was happy that she has a puppy and also fluffy. Then I got a tears coming out of my eyes it also took a photo of my son whit her dog and her.

Simple sentences

Hi,
This week we wrote some simple sentences for example he was singing you will add up a words to make it simple. So we practise writing a few words in our book before we put it in our blog here is some example of the simple sentences.

When He was singing in the morning.

Where He was singing in the morning at the park.

How He was singing with his friends in the morning at the park.

What He was singing with his friends in the morning at the park because he was performing.



He was singing with his friends in the morning at the park because he was performing.

She played the guitar at night in home by listening to music

Bench Ball and Kick long ball

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This week we have been doing a lot of things in P.E and also a lot fun because we are playing a game in P.E. So in the first day in P.E is we played a game called bench ball but before that we lined up and we got split with our class and we got to work with other class and also people that we really don't know yet we also got to play with them. After we got all the groups sorted we got split to find our rivals of this game we also work together with our group and maybe next time we could get some other strategies to use in the game that's why we don't need to repeat the same strategies in the game. Maybe next time if we were in groups maybe we could make some strategies some times.

The second time that we have done P.E is we also played a game that is could kick long ball. In this game we did not get split in our class because our groups is our class. So in this game we were versing another class and the same year as us. So in this game some one needs to roll the ball to the kicker and the one that kicks the ball needs to run and got to the other side of the court. Then the people in other groups need to hit the one that kicks the ball to get him or you could catch the ball to get him out. In that game we also use team work to win the game and also have fun.