Hi,
In PE we needed to do a research about Sophie Pascoe, we needed to make a slide about her here is the slide that I have made.
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi,
In PE we needed to do a research about Sophie Pascoe, we needed to make a slide about her here is the slide that I have made.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Kia ora Joshua. This is a fantastic slideshow about Sophie Pascoe. You have researched well but there's just a couple of mistakes. On slide 7, you show us her medals in a table of the past 3 Paralympics - 2008, 2012 and 2016. So on slide 5, you should say that she has competed in 4 Paralympics (currently competing in Tokyo 2020). Also, she trains way more that 4 times per week. See if you can find her training schedule. If not, I'll email you a link for this.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the fantastic home-learning Joshua. You are getting through a mountain of work which shows excellent commitment and resilience. Ka pai! Mrs Hastie