This week we have started writing about the starting of the sentence and we have to do one of them and make it in a sentence. I picked the sentence that start of who like the A very unusual face suddenly appeared in the window and we have to make that in a sentence. If you put a writing that looks like a reality it makes your writing more stronger because it more looks like happen in real life. We can also put a explanation mark on our writing like something crack like a window you can use that on your writing. Here is the work that I have made.
A very unusual face suddenly appeared in the window. I hid under my blanket and I was being quiet. It was a “Thief” he was trying to open the window and he couldn’t open it. I heard the thief takes a few steps and sprint and hit the window and I heard the window !crack” like he throw a stone on the window. But it wasn't a thief it was just a cat shadow.
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Hello joshua my name is Riley I liked the way you put all of that info in your writing paragraph.
ReplyDeleteHi Riley thank you for commenting on my blog I am also gonna also keep up the good work on my paragraph.
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