Athletics Day

This term 4 we have been doing athletics on Tuesday the 28 of the Nov we went athletics on our field and all of the Hornby Primary student are going on the athletics. So this is what we have to do on our Athletics day we have to do Sprints,Shot put, Long Distance, High Jump and Discus, long Jump. At the Sprints I really like what plays I came because I came at the first round 2nd and at the second round I came 3rd because I am vs the fastest and they beat me because they are so fast at Sprinting that's why I just came 3rd at the second round my also favorite athletics is sprints.

And we eat our Lunch....

 Then after lunch we rested a bit and we just play a little bit game when we are resting in the shade and we play ketchup game that you will slap the other person's hand. After we rest we did Shot put at the Shot Put we have to carry the ball and hold it whit your hand. Then put it on your shoulders before you push it the Shot Put it's not throwing it's pushing the ball. Then Axle,Lasa,Jullien got to the finals of the Shot Put because they throw the furthest.

Then we did Long Distance then I came 6th place because I am to slow at long Distance and I am getting tired so fast. But I still try my best then I made it to the finish line but it's okay that the beat me because it's just for fun the Athletics day. Then I have really fun day on the Athletics  day I was so happy at the Long Distance. Because it's good for you to run.

After the Long Distance we have to rest again because we got tired at long Distance because we did 4 laps at the field that's why we go on resting again. Then We did High jumped and me I can't even jump higher some of them jump a one meter and they did very good job because they can steal jump of that high. Me I can't even jump more higher because it's so high.

Then we did Discus and I did not win because they are very good thrower and farther me I can't even throw the Discus the circle plate thing that it is heavy. That's why I can't throw it harder and farther on the Discus but it still fun of that athletics game.

On long Jump I did not know what place I came but I got farther because I got 2.5 Meters on Long Jump. At the second round of the long Jump I still got 2.5 Meters on Long Jump That's why I can't even win on it and It's alright if i lost on it because they got the most farthest Jump on Long Jump. That's all we did on long Jump On Tuesday

I Hope you like my Athletics day

Computers

Hi guys. For the last past two weeks we have been doing our Information report and we have to choose what are we gonna do on our Information report then I choose computer Today I have a writing about computers. This writing will tell you who made the first computer but I can tell you now who is the first one who made the computer it was Charles Babbage who made the first one. The first country that have computer it London because Charles Babbage made it on London. For the long time also that I have been researching about my information report and I so some of it that they have the same writing and one of them copy one of there writing. That's why we made a Information report and we have to write it on our own words that's why I did a lot of researching only for my Information report we have been doing this also in a weeks that's why we need to post it on our blog to sea other children what our we doing. So some children that commented in my blog from another country that will be nice if they sea my blog and comment. I hope you also can put feed back on my blog I hope you like my story about the computers that I have been doing on my Information report and I hope you learned something about the computers that I write because I did a hard work on it on researching. I also gonna tell you that some of us made the Information report on the slide show or in the google docs but me I just did it on the google docs because its very easy to write on it. We also did not need a group to make the story because we have to write it on our own words.

I Hope you give me some feed back.

   First computer invented

Hi my name is Joshua and today I will tell you the first computer made. Computers are helping us to learn not to cheat for Example search it on the google like 1+1 = you don’t know and you search it on the google and it say it’s 2. So here some idea to use the computer’s properly use computers to do researching or research for some facts like polar bears not to copy their writing that you so on the screen because you don’t have any permissions. Computers are also amazing because when you press the keys on the keyboard it’s going to be in the same time on your screen.

And the first computer made is a metal it doesn’t have any screen because it’s only a meta. This computer is very awesome because you can’t sea any keyboards but you can type on it because at the side that is where the letters are. But first you have to put some papers in the middle of it and you also have to put some inks because you have to put it like on the bottle that is where you put the inks. You can also get tired because if you get out of papers you have to get another one and if you get out of inks you have to get another one.

But the builder who is the first one to make the computer he is awesome because no one know’s who can build the computers on that year. Because they doesn’t have any internet connection and that computer you don’t need to worry to charge it because it’s a metal and it’s a manual because you only have to put some inks and you can write any what you want. But that year the first computer made you can’t draw on it because you can only type a letter because they haven't know how to made that yet like our computer now.

But today the computer is now not like that because today the computers is so cool because now you can sea picture from it and you can watch videos and play some games. You can also now use the computers for learning to the school it helps you to learn not to cheat that you're searching it up on the google if you don’t know the answer and to day you can use the computers because you can take it off from the plog it out from the charge and you can take it where you ever want it to go. You can also use it as a charger because at the side you can charge your phone on it.

Do you know how the computer made they try to find some Engines. They also made the computer not so easy because they don’t know how to made it yet. So this is only a trial for them if the computer is gonna work they will build thousands of them that’s why they can sell it. So that the computers will get famous and famous on that year that’s why they will build thousands of computers.

After they build the computers the first one who build the computers that person is really famous on that year. Because no one knows how to build a computer they said some of the scientists help the person who is the first one who build the computer. That’s why when the computer is finished is really awesome but is only made out by one person and I did a lot of research here to find out who made the first computer and here it is Charless Babbage.

This sentence can help you or not because I gonna tell you where is the first computer made? So a lot of researching I found what country they made the first computer and I read the sentences. Then they said on the writing that the first computer was in the England.

They also said that the first computer made it doesn’t use any electricity that’s why you don’t need to worry about the electricity at your house. They said that the computer is a manual that’s why they build that don’t have any electricity computer and that is really cool made.

I also gonna tell you that this first computer made is very hard to make because they haven’t know how to make prototypes that’s why it takes many years. It was like that what I was researching on this computer that they made it a thousands of years to make it and after they made it they are very lucky to have the computers.

For this researching I found what day and year the first computer made so they said that the first computer made was on February 15, 1946. That is the day that they finish making the computer and it looks awesome when they show it on the TV.

And some of the computers are big that they build the first one and some of them are small. The first computer made also is like that you can see that computers wire at the back of it and the back of the computer are really long because they have to put long wires on it. That’s why the computer will work and if the computer doesn't have any wire maybe it’s not gonna work that’s why they put a wire on it.

They said that the machine that they use on the first computer made is and Engine and it’s could the Analytical Engine  that this Engine can do conceived. That thing is helping that computer to work that’s why the computer are really big and at the back of it there is the Engines.

This first computer Invented also can’t do and answering questions like maths. Because they haven’t know how to make a computer like our one because that is a long time ago because they don’t have any Internet. That’s why they made an a manual computer that don’t use electricity.

This video can show how charles Babbage computer works that’s why I been researching some video that it is real that charles Babbage made this computer. But they say that he did not finish it because he died and some scientist tried to finish the computer and could for some help from other scientist that’s why they can finish it. But the computer they made is just like you have to roll it then it will write some letters maybe you can get this video but me I don’t get this video because it’s look like not even real.

If you watch the link you can sea that the computer have number at the side of it. But the truth is that s the letters at the inside of it that’s why they have to keep rolling the computer that’s why can write at the piece of a paper. It was also easy to use because all you have to do is scroll the lever side and then to the other side. It was also fun because the people try the computer they were really like to buy it.

The inside of the computer is like this this is the parts of it and you can sea there that is have letters on it. Charles Babbage is also smart because we did not know that the computer that he made is only that you have to pull the lever and then you can write on it.

Charless Babbage is look like this and when he build the computer on that year he is very old like this on the picture. That’s why he did not finish the computer and some scientist helped  Charless Babbage and then he just died on that year but don’t worry about that it was a long time ago.

This last year long time ago they tried to build the computer like charles Babbage made but they don’t know. It was small but when they finish building it it was bigger than a person it wasn't like Charles Babbage made and there lever is big to because if the lever is small the will laugh at it because computers big and lever is small.

Every time they move the lever is the same time that at the piece of paper the letter that you write on it. They were very lucky that someone invented a computer and I just don’t know where they get the word computer or maybe I just need to do more researching for this and where did they get the word computer.

They could it the computer because it compute some questions that’s why the could it the computer they also say could it compute. But on that year the computer that they made can’t computer any questions but our computer is can computer questions know because now scientist they are the ones who is inventing machines.

Charless Babbage is an Engineer that’s why he Invented the computer first computer because no one else know how to make computer. He made the computer because he wants to help people he doesn’t want them to write at the piece of paper that’s why he Invented the computer that’s why we have now a computer.

He’s computer that he made is also can solve maths questions he made it that’s why the teacher don’t get confused how much are they. He made it for there country he made it because he likes to be the first one who made the awesome computer that they never ever made a computer.

Charles Babbage is also live in London he was travelling around the world but he born on United Kingdom. He also went to england he grew up there and he just get older and older on London Charles Babbage also made the first computer on London that’s why the London is the first country that have a computer that is because Charles Babbage Invented computer. When he finish it people tried to make computers as many as they want like Charles Babbage made.

After they made the computer they went to sell the computer and then they sell it like a thousands of dollars or its more than that. He sell it like 200 thousand dollars that’s why the computer is not easy to sell that year because it's so expensive. This is the end of the computer and this is also the end of my writing.

   The End

Translation,Reflection and Rotation

Hi guys. This week we have been learning about Translation, Rotation and Reflection and what it means. That's why I made something for you because this week we've also been making DLO's. They  can help you if you don't know what Translation, Reflection and Rotation means. Watch my DLO and then you will know what they mean.

I hope you give me some feedback.

Canterbury Swim School

This week we have been swimming on Canterbury Swim school. We have to swim to the end of the swimming pool and practice doing backstroke when we know how to do backstroke. After one day we jumped at the jumping board when we are jumping on the jumping board and it was my turn I was feel nervous. But after I jumped on the jumping board I got more fun doing it that's why I got to do it many times until we finished doing swimming. The reason they teach us how to swim that's why you can swim on the water not drowning on the water and if your drowning the easy way to do'it do a backstroke you just lay down on the water and look up straight that's why you can only float to the water and only you have to do is move you foot and swim away from the water. This was the last of the swimming lessons they have to jump on the jumping board all of them they will have a turn to do it and they only have to do the same thing like we did this days of swimming lessons.


And I got a lot more better at doing backstroke at swimming. The backstroke is also fun because you just gonna lay down on the water and you will automatically float on the water. This is also for safety because if you down know how to swim you can just lay down on the water and you will float.

MANCALA

This week Me and Quaid we have been reading Instructions how to play MANCALA. Then we have to play this game and first we have to read the instructions before we played it. Because if you did not read it and some one says they no how to played it and they cheated. That's why we made a slide show how to play the MANCALA that's why they will play well at the games and that's why no one can cheated on this game.

                            Here some slide shows How to play MANCALA

Reasons for and against Bees

For this week. We have been learning about the bees and we read some books and some of them on the site because we need to put good things and bad things about bees.

I put some facts about Bees For Examples. Then we read some about honey then I found something that they made the honey Bandage but they could it Healing Honey. Then they use healing honey that wounds get infected they don't heal and Honey contains a chemical called hydrogen peroxide. Then this bacteria helps wounds to heal. They said to that the bees they pollinate tomatoes and other fruits to help grow. Then they said that if the Bees died there no more Honey. Bees are good because they make a hips of honey and Bees make frame honey comb because they were putting the honey inside that frame because its have a hips of whole each whole have a honey.

Good things

Bads things

They get honey from the flowers. They like flowers. The bees put pollen on the flowers. They really like the honey because they carry it for a long long time. The Queen Bumblebees lays eggs. Live the Bumblebees alone and they live you alone. Bumblebees help plants grow. Farmers really like bees because they pollinate crop Worker Bees bring foods. Bees build underground nest of wax. They made Honey Bandage and if you put honey bandage on your leg and it would be sticky and messy, and the honey bandage would slide off when the skin warmed it up.

They gonna sting you if you distract them getting the Honey. They will died after they sting you or some bees don’t die. They make extremely buzz noise if they get on a group. They make noise if you want to relax outside of your back yard at the afternoon. Bumblebees live for one season before they died. Sometimes worker Bees kill the Queen Bees. Bumblebees can sting more than once sometimes. The Bees are annoying because if you want to go picnic they smell the food or sometimes if you just live them alone they are not gonna sting. Bumblebees are so scary because they are so big. New Queen Bees live alone over the winter. If the Bees sting you and you are allergic you can lose consciousness and you can get your neck will swallow and it’s you breath hardly and you can die. Carpenter bees can ruin your home if they are able to get inside and start hollowing out the wood beams.

Partly cloudly

For this week we have been writing about the partly cloudy it was a very good video because the cloud was have face. The clouds was look like fluffy and like marshmallows.

The city was getting dark and the sun was shining it was orange. The birds were going down to the city and they were going to the colorful tall houses. The birds was carrying some blankets and there were delivering them to the other peoples on the whole city. The birds were flying now and they was so fast they were like Airplanes or faster than Airplanes.

The birds went up to the clouds and the clouds were shining orange. They were like humans because they were have  face.They look like so fluffy and like marshmallows, Cotton Candy and Cotton Balls.

The cloud looked like kind but they are really kind they are the one who is making the presents to the people. They make it because they want the people to be happy. But this storm lonely cloud he is making a dangerous presents and scary he make crocodile’s and some sharks.

All of the birds was happy but this bird is little bit happy because he is doing some hard working. This bird was giving endangered presents to the people or to other animals on the city. That bird was truthful and kind but he was working with the stormy cloud. Then that bird can do it anymore.

That bird went to the good and shiny clouds because he so the puppies and it was socute. Then the stormy cloud look at the shiny cloud and kind he look at it because he’s bird went there. But the truth is his bird go there because he went to get the rugby gear and the bird wear it.

The stormy cloud was get angry and that stormy cloud was getting bigger and bigger but he stop and get back to normal then he started crying and it start raining down the city, it was thundering to because it was raining and the stormy cloud stopped caring.

The stormy cloud bird was carrying something and it a rugby gear. The bird put the suit on write at the front on the stormy cloud. The bird wants to give more dangerous animals to the other people.

The bird was really like now helping the stormy cloud and giving some dangerous animals. The bird was really like wearing now the rugby gear on suit.

The Ball Pit

For this week we have been writing about The Ball Pit and we write about the boy because he was afraid of heights. If you want to watch the video I put up a link at the top of my Writing. You can just press the blue link at the top.

The Ball Pit

It was a sunny day outside, it was really hot. It was hotter than the boiling water. That’s why, I was inside the playground at McDonalds. I was at the top of the slide. I was afraid of heights but I still tried to go down and I was nervous. My bones were chilling. I was so scared because it was my first time to try the slide. That’s why I was afraid. I tried the slide because my favourite colour is orange and the color of the slide was orange. The slide was really long the shape was like a big snake.

I went down the slide and I took a deep breath. Then I screamed AAAAAAAAA!  When I'm going down the slide it take’s a little bit longer to go down to the ball pit. The ball pit was deep as the ocean. I screamed again AAAAAAAAAAAA! Then I fell down to the almost end of the ball pit. I was scared because it was dark down in the ball pit. There was only one light at the top then I tried to get up but it was slippery and I tried it again to go up. I almost fell down but I did not know that I already held the lollipop stick.

I picked up the lollipop and used it to get up to the ball pit. I used the half lollipop like a hammer because it stuck to the balls and I got up to the ball pit it was little bit longer to go up. I got tired because it was hard to get up here and I wished I don’t fall again to that deep ball pit because it was deeper than the ocean. When I got up to the top of the ball pit I ate the half lollipop and if it’s a dirty lollipop I’m still gonna eat it.

Ordering Fractions

For this week we have been learning about the Ordering Fractions. We did a DLO about the Ordering Fractions, this video can help you to solve some fractions if you watch it.

The Piano

For this week we have been writing about the piano. The song was really good you almost cry if you hear it. I enjoyed writing this week, I found it very exciting. I hope you enjoy my writing.

I was in my bedroom to playing the piano, it was dark inside my bedroom because there is only one light. I sat down on the seat and started to play the piano.

I was playing my wife favorite song then played it myself. I was remembering the last few years when my wife died. I so my wife she was transparent and joined to play the piano she pulled my hand and she started to play the piano we played together until she disappeared after she kissed me on my face.

I was keep playing the piano until I remembered the war when my friend died my friend died because at the bad guys we are only two left at the war. My friend tried to fight back then some good shooters hit my friend and died I was only one left at the war because my friend died.

I did not stop playing piano then I so myself when I was a child opening my present that my dad give to me I so a toy. It was a horse toy that you ride it then run and it feels that you are really riding a real horse then I go on my piano then played it. That’s why when I get older I played the piano to remembered at the last few years ago on 1998.

Extravaganza performance

W.A.L.T: Extravaganza Performance 


On Wednesday and Thursday the 30st ,31st August 6:30 PM I was sick that day and we needed to perform our dance at the High School Hall. That's why my group is only go to the High School hall and they performed the We Don't Know How Lucky We Are. Their performance was really fun and it was funny Axel was really funny dancing because he was like laughing on the stage. They were kicking their legs at left and right. They were like the comedy dancer because the We Don't Know is a comedy song made by Fred Dagg. That night was really fun and there were so many children performing on the stage. Some of them did earthquake performing. After that they did a dance about the earthquake. After they did that they did the first aid medicine, I think the reason they did it big was so the audience could see it . I think after that they did an a rock'n roll music because it was very loud music. That group used a guitar,drums and I forgot what they used at night. But that performance was really fun and the dance ended with the {Why does Love Do This To Me} and all of the children in room 11 and 12 went up on the stage after the Gutter Black. It was awesome, they performed like the rock'n roll at the last song. That was the song It's Why Does Love Do This To Me. When the song started the children from room 11 and 12 got up to the stage. They did it very quickly because the song was starting. That's why they were really fast going up to the stage. There were heaps of them going up so they were almost squished up when the stage. They were so loud singing the song why Does Love Do This To Me and they were like free because some of them were jumping like they were full of energy that night. Some of them were doing some dance moves on the stage. The Gutter Black was guittaring at the front I think so because I wasn't there that night. The reason that the Gutter Black was at the front was because they had some guitars and flutes and they used that, that's why it looked like they were using those things because the music was sounding like a guitar and flute and drums but my classmates didn't have any drums. This was the performance ending.

We Don't Know How Lucky We Are

This week we have been learning about the artist from new Zealand. I chose We Don't Know How Lucky We Are because the song is really good that's why I did this one. 


 

Fractions

W.A.L.T.    we are learning fractions


Hi guys. This is my maths DLO this DLO can help you if you watch it. This DLO its about fraction is little tricky one. That's way I made a DLO about fractions.



                                                             Thank for watching

The Ridge

W.A.L.T. write a descriptive piece of writing through the eyes of Danny.

Hi guys. For the last 1 week we have been writing about The Ridge. This is the story is about it its not quit long but this is good story. Bye.

Have a look at the video first. Click Here.

Title: The Ridge

I was in a river and I am paddling my boat to move the boat. I so a seal at the grass walking back to water. There so many hills mountains around me. I bring my bike because I can ride it if I am at the grass.

I was getting out of my bout and get my bike to ride it. I ride my bike all the way at the top of the hill but when it's high carried my bike all the way up to the end of the hill.

I ride my bike all the way down the hill I did some tricks like balancing in my bike then jumped to get to the other side of the hill then I ride it then I was really tired and I am at the top the hill then I carried my bike all the way up.

It was so scary because if I did the wrong way I can fall down the hill. Then I started riding my bike all the way down the hill it was a long time to go down the hill. I was so fast when I am almost down the hill.

When I am down the hill I paddled my bike so fast. The grass was brown and high there was a fence write at front of me then I do know what I am gonna do. I decided to bounce at the fence and do a back lift.

I was at the at  the beach seating.At the sand watching the water moving forward backwards. Then I put my bike beside me that's why after I rest a little bit I can go back to my boat.

The End

How to make a good blog comment.

We are learning how to interact online in a kind, positive and helpful way.

Learning how to leave quality blog comments is an important part of having a blog. It teaches us how to interact with others online and enables us to continue growing our positive digital footprint.

1.To Make a comment better it's good to have a connection.

2.Always a good thing to ask a Question at the End of your comment.

3.Positive and be specific.

4.Write near faction Information how old it how tall is it.

5.Compliment the writer in a specific Way.

Before you comment watch this video and you can learn how to comment positive or be specific.

Easter Island Model creation

 W.A.L.T     create a model that shares something  we have bean learnt about our mystery.


Hi guys. This is my model creation about the Easter Island look like we did not put trees on Easter Island because the Easter Island don't have a trees because the people at Easter Island cut the trees to move the moia statues. Aisa, Travis, Keyana, Lyan, and I worked together to finish this Easter Island.

Start drawing 

I start drawing the Island Land first I use the pencil that's why if I got a mistake we can rubber it but after I draw it I did not get mistake and after i draw it on a pencil I draw it on a pentel pen and I trace it that's why my drawing gets brighter that's why we can sea it.

Paper mache

We start cutting the paper and get a glue. When my group finished reaping the paper we started paper mached the Island and we paper mache the Island for 1 week and then my group start helping me to paper mache the Island that's why we can finished it.

Painting

We start panting after we finished the paper mache and all of my group get a turn to paint the Island and then Travis and I start making the little moia statues we made a hips of statues to put them around the Island and I counted how many moias on the island then I started counting the moia and the moias 20 pices.

Finishing 

I putted the 20 moias around the island but there are to many that's why my group helped me to put the moias around the island then after we put the moias I made the plat form and the people at Easter Island They could the plat form ahu and then we put 4 moias at the to of the plat form.

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Speech DLO

W.A.L.T.S

Summarising

I am learning to summarise and retell  the main ideas and important information from what I have read in my own words.

Hi guys. This is my mystery DLO speech and this is a speech about the Easter Island  that is how they move the statues of the Easter Island and this is a slide show that's gonna solve the mystery of the Easter Island and this is have an a 4 minutes speech and I think that the people use a ropes to move the moias and I hope you enjoy it.




                       I hope you learnt something on my speech thank you for watching

Easter Island DLO

Hi guys. This my Easter Island DLO and this DLO is about how they move the statues or moias of the Easter Island and then we made a slide show that how they move the moias. When my group and me are making the slide shows for 2 days and after 1 day I made a DLO or screencastify  for my mysteries about the Easter Island.



      Thank you for watching I hope you like my DLO about the Easter Island amazing mysteries .

Double and halve to solve multiplication problems

W.A.L.T.        Double and halve to solve multiplication problems 

Hi guys. This is my maths DLO again but this is a doubling in halve to solve the multiplication problems and this is can go help to solve some problems bye.

Solve division problems by multiplication.

W.A.L.T.    Solve division problems by multiplication.

Hi guys. We have bean learning for the last past two weeks on our reminders after one day we posted our maths DLO in our blog bye.

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Mindmup

    

 W.A.L.T.S 

I am learning to think carefully about what the author is telling me.



Hi Guys, for the past two weeks we have bean searching about Easter Island and we did this mind map. Then we searched in the epic book. We then read what happened. Then we wrote it in our mind map.

Solve Division by Multiplication

Hi. Guys this is my maths partitioning again but its not same that I post first like the other partitioning by multiplication but this is not same multiplication partitioning. This is division partitioning. Then the division is gonna be multiplication and this is gonna help you to solve your division questions. Bye.

My Adunience

We are learning to create a positive digital footprint.

We often share personal information when we are online. The people we share with could be our friends and family or people we don't know. We need to make smart decisions about what personal information we share online.

multiplication and partioning

Hi guys. This is my maths DLO its not same this is a multiplication partioning this is gonna help you to make your work easy. Bye.

Exploring Blogs - part two

We are learning to create a positive digital footprint.

We often share personal information when we are online. The people we share with could be our friends and family or people we don't know. We need to make smart decisions about what personal information we share online.

Reflection

Cultural Show

This term  we have been looking at different culture. For the last 3 weeks we have been learning a traditional  cultural dance. I learnt the sasa for 3 weeks and the year six boys and year four boys doing the haka and the year six girls and year four girls doing the ti rakau. The audience watched the sasa and then the ti rakau and after the ti rakau the year six boys and the year four boys performed  the haka. Then after we Performed we all had shared lunch.

I felt happy because that we preformed and made the audience happy.

Bow and aarow

We went on Spencer Park and collected some shells, wood and seaweed at the beach.  When we got back to the school we drew what we were going to do with our shells. wood and seaweed.  I made the bow and arrow.  I just used some string and wood we are doing this one week. I made a bow and arrow because that was the way the wood was shaped.

Duathlon

On the 30th of March we did a Duathlon. We used some scooters or bikes and if they don’t have scooter or bikes we had to run.  First we ran and got our bikes or scooters.  We went to the High school tennis court.  We went 2 times around the tennis court.  We then came back and ran two times around the field. When we finished running I just came fourth in the race and the Duathlon was really fun .

Spencer Park

W.A.L.T Write an information report that informs the audience.

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when….

• I use an opening statement that explains the subject of the report.

• The opening statement is followed by sentences that describe the event; what you saw, what you did, how you felt, what you learnt.
• Each paragraph focuses on a different aspect of the topic; travelling, the beach, the lagoon walk, playground.
• A general statement about the topic usually rounds off the report.

Spencer Park

Last Friday 10 th March we went to Spencer Park. We traveled with 2 buses and 5 cars. When we were at Spencer Park we lined up outside and we got into our groups and after we lined up we went under the big tree.

My group and I went first to the beach and we saw some big pieces of seaweed. I collected some shells that I found in the sand.

After we went to the beach we went to the playground and my group and I were playing on the playground. I climbed to the big Spider web. I went on the zipline and it was fun but there were heaps of children at the zipline.

Next, we saw some birds and some chickens just running around the park. After that we eat our lunch and play at the playground and we have 48 minutes playing at the playground.

After we go on the bus and we came back to the school.

The Five Dollars

This is my story, Five Dollars.  We did this on our chrome books and we used screencastify to make the video. A few days latter we posted our Five Dollars on our blog and here it is .Bye

The Present

W.A.L.T:  Write a narrative

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when….

• The title is suitable for the text.

• The orientation tells who the story is about, and when and where the story happened.
• The complication describes a problem and explains what happened next.
• The resolution explains how the problem was solved.
• Seeks feedback and makes changes to texts to improve clarity and meaning.

In Ako Ngatahi we had to write a narrative about a video. It was about a boy opening a present that was a dog with three legs. Here is the video of the present. I hope you enjoy my story.

The Present

The Present

On one fine day I am playing my ps4 counter strike game. At the brightly sun at the afternoon . My mum was get home She have a box and I don’t no what is inside the box. My mum put the box to the table and my mum distracted me and stop playing. I almost get lost on my game. My mum said that is a present for you I said to my mum for me the present I open the box and I so a puppy It was cool. But I look at the dog legs and I so broken leg. I said “Yuck.” I throw the puppy  and the puppy start being silly. puppy came back. I kick the puppy the puppy found a ball and the dog has get the ball and the dog get little hurt  when the puppy go under the cabinet when the puppy getting the ball and the puppy ran and fell and lose the ball `and he wants to play with me and I kick the ball and the dog has get the ball.The dog was jumped in the box and the dog was get inside the box.the dog ran and get the hurt in the cabinet and bang and me I see the ball and the dog jumped.Get the ball and came back to me and the dog fell three times when and the dog give the ball to me again and I get the ball and I stand up and I have a broken leg to and the dog was get sad when I stand and I said to my mum where going outside and I throw the ball little far and the dog get It.

Cyber smart DLO

 Yesterday we went to Hornby High School auditorium. John was telling us about Cyber safety. This is a DLO showing you how to be safe online.  I liked John's jokes, they were really funny and I liked listening to his cyber safety message.